Grade 8, New Model Private College
Alex had always loved singing. As a child, he’d belt out his favourite tunes in the shower, much to his mother’s delight. She’d smile and join in, their voices harmonising in perfect sync. When Alex’s school started a choir, his mother encouraged him to join. She’d attend every performance, beaming with pride as Alex’s confidence grew.
At home, she’d help him practice, sitting patiently as he ran through scales and exercises. “You’re a natural, sweetie” she’d say, offering words of encouragement when he struggled. Alex’s passion deepened and his mother was his biggest support.
However not everyone shared her enthusiasm. Alex’s father, a practical man with a no-nonsense approach to life, saw singing as a hobby, not a career. “You’ll never make a living doing that”, he’d say, dismissing Alex’s dreams of becoming a professional singer. “Why don’t you focus on being something more practical, like a businessman or an engineer?” he’d suggest, comparing singing unfavourably to more ‘respectable’ pursuit.
Despite his father’s disapproval, Alex continued to pursue his passion. He worked hard, honing his craft and earning a spot as lead singer in his school choir. His father’s disdain only grew. “You are wasting your time with this singing nonsense”, he’d say, belittling Alex’s passion and making him feel like he was foolish to pursue his dreams.
One day, Alex’s teacher asked him to lead the choir performance. Alex was excited and overjoyed, feeling like his hard work was paying off. When he got home, he couldn’t wait to share the good news with his parents. “Mom, dad, I have some amazing news”, he exclaimed, his eyes shining with excitement. “My teacher asked me to lead the choir performance, and she says I am really good”.
His mother smiled, her eyes sparkling with pride, “That’s wonderful, sweetie! I’m so proud of you”. His father however grunted, his expression, disapproving. “That’s nice, Alex, but let’s not get too carried away. You still need to focus on your studies and find a real career”. Sitting down for dinner Alex’s father handed him a glass of water. “Drink up, son, you must be thirsty after a long day of singing.” Unbeknown to Alex, the water contained a medicine that would change everything.
After he drank the water with medicine, Alex didn’t notice anything out of the ordinary. During the next choir practice, he realised that his voice wasn’t working like it used to. He strained to hit the high notes, but they all came out flat. The choir teacher noticed the change in Alex’s voice and expressed concern. She approached him after practice and recommended that Alex see a doctor to figure out what was going on.
Alex didn’t think much of it, but he decided to mention it to his mother that evening. “Mom, my choir teacher thinks I should see a doctor about my voice”, he said, trying to downplay the situation. His mother took it seriously. “Let’s schedule an appointment right away”, she said, her expression filled with worry. The doctor’s office was a blur of nervous chatter and sterile smells. Alex’s mother held his hand tightly as they waited for the doctor to come in. The doctor’s words would change everything.
“Alex, the tests show that your vocal cords have been severely damaged,” the doctor said gently. “It’s unlikely that you will ever sing again”. Hearing this, Alex felt like he’d been punched in the gut; he looked at his mother, seeing the shock and sadness reflected in her eyes. “What… what happened?” he stammered.
The doctor hesitated before answering. “It looks like you had taken a vocal suppressant pill, designed to ruin your singing voice. It’s unlikely your voice can be restored”, the doctor concluded. Alex’s world came crashing down around him. He thought of his father and a wave of realization washed over him. “The water… It wasn’t just water.” Tears streamed down his face as he realised the truth.
Months went by and Alex struggled to come to terms with what had happened. He knew his father was responsible, but he couldn’t bring himself to confront him; instead he bottled his emotions, pretending everything was fine, but it wasn’t fine. Alex wasn’t the same happy, carefree person he used to be. He was now consumed by sadness and stress, his eyes sunken and his smile a rare sight.
His mother noticed the change in him and tried to be supportive, but she couldn’t penetrate the darkness that had settled around him. One day, as Alex sat on the couch, staring blankly at the TV, his mother sat down beside him and wrapped a comforting arm around his shoulders. “Alex, I have been working on something”, she said softly. “I know things have been tough, but I think I might have some good news.
Alex looked at her skeptically, but his mother’s smile was infectious. “What is it?” he asked, his voice barely above a whisper. “I found a record label that has a vocal specialist who might be able to help you restore your voice,” she said, her eyes shining with hope. Alex’s heart skipped a beat. Could it be true? Could he really get his voice back? A spark of hope ignited within him, and for the first time in months, he felt a glimmer of optimism.
“What do we do now?” he asked, his voice a little stronger now. His mother smiled. “We’ll schedule an appointment and see what the specialist has to say. It’s a long shot, but it’s worth a try.”
The next day Alex and his mother met with the specialist, and he agreed to restore Alex’s voice, but in exchange Alex had to produce music for the record label. Alex was hesitant to agree to the deal, but his mother encouraged him and Alex agreed. Alex began his journey towards healing and recovery. With the support of his mother and the expertise of the specialist, Alex slowly started to regain his voice.
As he progressed, Alex discovered that his voice wasn’t just about singing, but about expressing himself and connecting with others. He learned to appreciate the beauty of his own unique voice, even if it was different from what it used to be. With months of hard work and maximum effort Alex finally regained his voice.
Seeing that he had regained his voice, Alex’s mother burst into tears of joy. Her son was happy, and he was himself again. Alex remembered the deal he had made with the record label, and he worked tirelessly on a song that he had been writing. With his mother’s help he finished the song. The record label was impressed by Alex’s talent; they decided to produce his song and it was a huge hit. People couldn’t get enough of the catchy beat and powerful vocals.
Meanwhile, Alex’s father who had always disapproved of his son’s music, found himself tapping his feet to the tune without realizing it was Alex’s song. He was proud of the singer, but he had no idea it was his own son. That all changed when Alex performed on TV. His father’s jaw dropped as he watched his son shine on stage, belting out the lyrics to his hit song. A mix of emotions swirled inside him, pride, surprise, and regret for not supporting Alex’s passion. Alex’s father quickly drove to Alex’s concert to see his son perform.
After the performance Alex’s father approached him, his eyes shining with tears. “Alex, I’m so sorry”, he said, his voice trembling with emotion. “I’m sorry for taking away your voice, for not believing in you when you needed me the most. Can you ever forgive me son?”
Alex looked at his father, seeing genuine remorse in his eyes. “Dad, I forgive you”, he said, his voice filled with emotion. “You may have taken away my voice, but you couldn’t take away my passion for music, and in the end, it made me stronger and more determined to succeed, and it made our bond stronger”.
Their conversation was interrupted by the cheers of the crowd, but Alex’s father held him tight, feeling a sense of pride and love he’d never felt before. “I’m so proud of you son”, he repeated his voice filled with emotion.
From that day on, Alex’s father became his biggest fan, attending all his concerts and cheering him on. Alex’s mother smiled, knowing that her son’s journey had brought the family closer.
As Alex looked at the sea of adoring fans, he realised that his father’s initial disapproval had ultimately led him to find his true voice and purpose. He was grateful for the struggles he’d faced, as they’d made him stronger and more determined to succeed.
With his family by his side, Alex took the stage, his voice soaring as he sang from the heart. The crowd erupted in applause and Alex knew he’d found his true calling.

